【ENGLISH】 Proofreading Transcription

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#1 Sat, 17/01/2026 - 04:18

mikistli
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I transcribed the song, but there are parts where I think I might have not heard correctly:

Song: https://lyricstranslate.com/en/sirenia-callous-eyes-lyrics
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CFd3iW3bYv4

Isolated vocals (no music): https://voca.ro/1hCeXUhUNujo

Quote:

Dreadful dreams, misleading stars
Hidden signs in the dark
Life reveals who we are
Fallen ones

Mysteries, obscurities
Profundities unrevealed

Callous eyes, the longing lights → Callous eyes, maligned minds
Life is all nothing but guilt defined → Life is all nothing but ill-defined
Stone-cold heart growing dark
Tainted souls on a deadly path
All jump towards the day of wrath → All drawn towards the day of wrath

Silent screams, infernal scars → Taunted screams, infernal scars
Darkness eats our hearts → Darkness sees our hearts / seized our hearts [?]
Turns to stone, one by one,
Oh, my love

Mysteries, obscurities
Profundities linger still

Callous eyes, the longing lights → Callous eyes, maligned minds
Life is all nothing but guilt defined → Life is all nothing but ill-defined
Stone-cold heart growing dark
Tainted souls on a deadly path
All jump towards the day of wrath → All drawn towards the day of wrath

Callous eyes, the longing lights → Callous eyes, maligned minds
Life is all nothing but guilt defined → Life is all nothing but ill-defined
Stone-cold heart growing dark
Tainted souls on a deadly path
All jump towards the day of wrath → All drawn towards the day of wrath

Callous eyes, the longing lights → Callous eyes, maligned minds
Life is all nothing but guilt defined → Life is all nothing but ill-defined
Stone-cold heart growing dark
Tainted souls on a deadly path
All jump towards the day of wrath → All drawn towards the day of wrath

All jump towards the day of wrath → All drawn towards the day of wrath

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 05:31

que_kt
que_ktExpert

Maybe with this music video, you might be able to read her lips to make out some words
The video:

This is what I got:

Quote:

Callous eyes, the longing lights → Callous eyes, maligned minds
Life is all nothing but guilt defined → Life is all nothing but ill-defined
Stone-cold hearts growing dark
Tainted souls on a deadly path
All jump towards the day of wrath → All drawn towards the day of wrath

Tortured(?) screams, infernal scars
Darkness sees (could also be "seized"?) our hearts
Turns to stone, one by one
Oh, my love

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 05:40 (Reply to #2)

mikistli
mikistliModerator?✨mikistli

Everything else seems to line up. I spent an hour trying to read her lips but even then, her pronunciation isn't always that great.

Tortured(?) screams, infernal scars → Tone deaf screams? Drown the screams?
Darkness sees (could also be "seized"?) our hearts → I don't heard the 'd' at the, definitely leaning towards 'sees'

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 05:52 (Reply to #3)

que_kt
que_ktExpert

I also heard "taunted screams" but using it as an adjective for "screams" seems uncommon, if not far-fetched; I also heard "tone that screams" but that sounded clunky.

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 06:10

mikistli
mikistliModerator?✨mikistli

Isolated vocals on YT:

I think you might be right, I repeated it and I think it's definitely 'taunted screams'. She's singing it / pronouncing it: TO[EA]WN-TED

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 13:20 (Reply to #4)

It's a term from gaming. That's an aggro skill to divert the attention of enemies from your teammates. Aggro = Aggression (control).

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 13:33 (Reply to #6)

que_kt
que_ktExpert

Okay?

Sat, 17/01/2026 - 13:36

If we take into account gaming lore, then the lyrics seem to describe the aftermath of the heroes of Diablo 1 (which was told in Diablo 2). Anyway, my recommendation for two of the lines:

Life is all nothing but guilt-defined
All jump towards the day of wrath

Note: Jump = portaling.

Update: Also…
Darkness seized our hearts

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