Surrender

Coucou! At one time I used to believe that Persian translation of “Till forever falls apart” is your best work. Mind you. It became much better. Hitherto I haven’t seen a translation like this.
You picked up a pretty hard song to understand notwithstanding the translation is second to none.
You adopted a suitable tone and avoided superfluous matter but it’s not too blunt or brusque.
I look forward to hearing from ya!