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1998Ruby1998

Falcon

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Спасибо, я не говорию много русский (Конечно, я не говорию белорусский.), и это перевод сделан давно. Я почти забыла.

1998Ruby1998

But the video is an interview, not just a simple musical clip, I don't think it can be made as a request. Anyway, the text is now found, probably I will add this song into this site sooner or later! ... подробнее

infiity13

电筒

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I also did the same in '美国的氧气' https://lyricstranslate.com/en/american-oxygen-%E7%BE%8E%E5%9B%BD%E7%9A%84%E6%B0%A7%E6%B0%94.html

infiity13

美国的氧气

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Hi, me again. I hope you are not frustrated from corrections. First stanza Fifth line: 我们一种镍和一角钱汗水的 Nickel is indeed '镍', but in here it means the USA coin, five cents. '汗水的' is an adjective, b... подробнее

infiity13

电筒

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Here are some suggestions to the translation: The first line: 我会在自己的 It does not make any sense, it literally means 'I will be in myself' To say 'I will be on my own' 我将会独自一个 Meaning 'I will be a... Here are some suggestions to the translation: The first line: 我会在自己的 It does not make any sense, it literally means 'I will be in myself' To say 'I will be on my own' 我将会独自一个 Meaning 'I will be alone' literally. Second line: 我感觉好害怕我不知道的事 The '感觉' here is used quite incorrectly, and so are '好' and the second '我'. '感觉' is a noun in Chinese. We would use '感到' I would say: 我害怕着未知的事 (I fear of something that is unknown) Seventh line: 我看天空 You left out a preposition '着'. It means 'at' generally. Suggestion: 我抬头看着天空 (I lift my head and look up the sky) Eighth: 和我在黑暗里，我找，我停，我不飞行 In Chinese, we don't use '和' here even though it is the same as 'and'. If so, this line would be 'In the dark together with me' rather than 'And in the dark I found'. Also, '我不飞行' is a bit strange. '飞行' is a noun, meaning aviation or flight. Suggestion: 我在黑暗里，我找，我停，我不会飞 Second stanza First line: 当我得你，我得到我需要的 This first part is incorrect. We won't say '我得你' even though '得' is a verb and it means 'get'. You left out the preposition '到', also the English line is 'I got you and I', you forget the 'I'. The second part of the line, you left out '所', which in this line, it means 'all' Suggestion: 当我得到你和我，我得到我所需要的 Second line: 我看着我的周围，我看着那甜的生活 The '我的' is redundant. And to describe 'sweet' in Chinese here, we would use '甜蜜' Suggestion: 我看着周围，我看着那甜蜜的生活 Third line: 我处在黑暗中,但是你就是我的手电筒 '处在' is a bit strange. We usually say '身处', which means 'body is in' literally. But since here the line says 'stuck', '身处' would not be the most accurate. Suggestion: 我被困在黑暗中,但是你就是我的手电筒 Fifth line: 当你照耀我的眼睛里，我无法停止我的心跳 The words needed to be arranged into order in he first part of the sentence, because this part looks like 'Your glow is shining in my eyes'. Also, '照耀' is mostly used to describe the sun shining. Suggestion: 当你在我的眼睛里闪耀，我无法停止我的心跳 Sixth line: 我不会说谎，这就是那甜的生活 Again, we would use '甜蜜' Correction: 我不会说谎，这就是那甜蜜的生活 Third stanza First line: 我看见你长长的影子在那山顶 The line in English has 'beneath', in this Chinese line, it would mean 'I see your long shadow on that mountain top.' And there is a bit of confusion here, the line says 'shadows', which means more than one. I doubt that if human can make two or more shadows at one time under the sun, so I guess '你' would not fit that much. The '长长' here would also be a problem, because 'long' is linked with the word 'beneath', it means the shadows are far under the mountain top. Suggestion: 我看见影子在山顶之下 Second line: 虽然大雨一直下但我不要恐怕 '虽然' is commonly used when there are 'but' or 'although'. '不要' is 'don't want', but not 'am not' here. '恐怕' is also not quite used correctly. When you use '恐怕', a noun would be followed behind. Eg. '我恐怕猫狗' would be 'I am afraid of cats and dogs.' Suggestion: 我不会害怕就算雨下不停 Alright, that's all.подробнее

1998Ruby1998

明日不会亡

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Translation updated!

1998Ruby1998

Little help here?

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Spacibo vse!

asasasw

Russian Line Translation

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I would say 'Hundreds of gatherings and millions of separations'. That's my interpretation on the line and on the song. Я не знаю по-русски хорошо, но это прекрасная песня.

Lailana

Hello *

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Selam! Have fun!

IamDidi

Hi everybody :D

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Selam! Enjoy yourself here, you can help out in the transcriptions and translations requests. You can definitely polish your languages here and even learn a few sentences of other languages! Bonne ... подробнее

1998Ruby1998

Imprisoned Bird

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I don't think all songs in English have personal pronouns and punctuation for every line. And most of the Chinese songs I come across does not have any punctuation at all. My teacher tells me that son... подробнее

1998Ruby1998

Imprisoned Bird

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I do speak Chinese and English well (Speak them ever since birth and my IELTS proves that my English is not bad, well at least getting 8 in all four papers is good enough for me.) For example, if you... подробнее

Grampa Wild Willy

L'oiseau emprisonné

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I think that should do. But for the word... http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dispensable I see it in here. (my literature teacher recommends this website to us, and I think she is trustwort... подробнее

1998Ruby1998

Imprisoned Bird

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I don't know how to explain Chinese sentence structure to you, it's just that it won't work. '和寂寞交換著悲傷的心事', it is like...how should I explain...it's like you are alone with a thing called 'loneliness'... подробнее

Grampa Wild Willy

L'oiseau emprisonné

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Not exactly 'do not need', it just means that I am not needed, not just that, it is something more than that yet there is no way for me to explain. (I don't really know how to translate that Chinese p... подробнее

Grampa Wild Willy

L'oiseau emprisonné

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Could we use 'disponsable' for 'Je suis l'ombre dont tu n'as pas besoin' and make it into 'Je suis votre l'ombre qui est disponsable' (I know it may be bad French, I must admit I am only good at readi... подробнее

1998Ruby1998

Imprisoned Bird

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Most of the lines does not have pronouns at all and I have to figure out if it means 'I' or 'you' as both of them are suitable but have different. I will try to fix 'solitary' And Chinese punctuation... подробнее

董娜

Please Speak Chinese

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The first asterisk '不管说到什么后面都会加上有木有' '有木有' equals '有没有' (I don't know if '有木有' is a Taiwanese saying or what, but I have seen them a lot in many modern Chinese stories online) The whole sentence is ... подробнее