Оригинальный текст
Французский
Перевод
Английский
Lui
He
He, you know, has the words needed to amaze me
it's true, he knows how to make me smile, comfort me
I could have never imagined he would leave.
He, his life, it's adventure, music and girls
too bad, I accept him as he is,
nothing is ever finished and if he's back I'd say 'yes'.
It would do me good to see him again,
and find me again in private with him
it would do me good to see him again
and find again our forbidden games. 1
He, often, has love shouts, has childish words,
one day with flowers, yet the next day
he no longer has anything of what I expect
It would do me good to see him again,
and find me again in private with him
it would do me good to see him again
and find again our forbidden games.
He, he says, there's no rock'n'roll without King,
it's true there's never love without spleen,
I know, but if only he [could] come back tomorrow.
He and me, it would be like before and even a bit more
I think, I would tell him 'I love you' simply
like that, letting me go between his arms.
It would do me good to see him again,
and find me again in private with him
it would do me good to see him again
and find again our forbidden games.
- 1. (Probably) A reference to the film Jeux Interdits (1952) by French director René Clément.




Zarina01




Комментарии 2
Thank you :D
Here are some suggestions:
He, you know, has the right words to amaze me
is adventure
And to be alone with him again
He, he says, sounds a bit awkward to me, I'd remove the second he
Play again our forbidden games?
Love shouts -> Makes declarations of love
He could come back tomorrow/Came back tomorrow
I would just tell him 'I love you'