Hi! First off, I'd like to compliment you on your translation: you conveyed the meaning of the original text very well.
However, I'd suggest a little more accurate translation:
"When/After He will have given rest to the ones He cherishes
here comes the legacy of the Lord: the offspring, fruit of the womb"
What do you think? Hope I helped you! :)
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Hi! First off, I'd like to compliment you on your translation: you conveyed the meaning of the original text very well.
However, I'd suggest a little more accurate translation:
"When/After He will have given rest to the ones He cherishes
here comes the legacy of the Lord: the offspring, fruit of the womb"
What do you think? Hope I helped you! :)