Convite

Pluto (Portugal)

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Превод

английски

Convite

Sim não falo só por mim eu quero-te a provar do que é teu

Agora sim eu falava do que eu sinto

É por força do desejo ser eu

Por força do que é meu és tudo o que eu vejo

Ontem tudo o que eu queria era subir ao teu corpo

Eu passei no teu medo e esqueci o teu ego

És tudo o que eu vejo

Ontem tudo o que eu queria era subir ao teu ego

Eu passei no teu medo e esqueci o teu corpo

És tudo o que eu vejo

De repente o assunto é assunto

E tu mergulhas bem fundo fugindo do amor

Cá estarei no fim dessa espera até ao tempo do que era

E não volta a ser

Sim não falo só por mim eu quero-te a provar do que é teu

Agora sim eu falava do que eu sinto

É por força do desejo ser eu

Por força do que é teu és tudo o que eu vejo

Agora desisto sempre que eu insisto eu esqueço que existo

Isto é só um convite

Invitation

Yes, I don't say that just for me, I want you to taste what is yours

Just now I talked about what I feel

It's by the desire force to be me

By force of everything that is mine, you're everything I see

Yesterday, everything I wanted was to go up on your body

I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego

It's everything what I see

Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego

I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego

It's everything what I see

Suddenly the topic is topic

And you sink into the deepness to get away from love

Here I'll be, at the end of this long waiting, at that time when I was

and I can't be it again

Yes, I don't say that just for me, I want you to taste what is yours

Just now I talked about what I feel

It's by the desire force to be me

By force of everything that is mine, you're everything I see

Now I give up, because everytime I insist I forget that I do exist

This is just an invitation

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dowlenon1

submitted on 21 юли 2012 - 13:00

Добавено в отговор на заявка, направена от

Lemoncholic

Give a shoutout to dowlenon1

Изказвания 6

LevinaSun

21 юли 2012, 16:20

Good translation. I'll add one thing though:
És tudo o que eu vejo = You're everything I see

dowlenon1 A

21 юли 2012, 17:38

Thank you for your comment and your suggestion, it has been corrected.

Lemoncholic

8 август 2012, 19:59

So, this is the last song for me to check. Let's get it started.

>Yesterday everything I wanted was go up on your body
"...everything I wanted was to go up on your body." Same with "...on your ego."

>Now I give up, always that I insist on it I forget that I do exist
Here comes the tricky line. How about this? "Now I give up, everytime I insist I forget that I do exist."

That's all. :)

dowlenon1 A

8 август 2012, 22:56

Hi again! :D

The second one I totally agree, I even would add "because everytime I insist..." to make it better. However, the first one I don't understand what you mean.

What you mean "Same with "... on your ego"? If you are talking about this part: "I passed by your fear, and I forgot your ego", would you suggest I put "and I forgot on your ego"?

Lemoncholic

9 август 2012, 09:32

I mean that you've forgotten to add the "to" before the verb, that's all. ;)

"Yesterday everything I wanted was to go up on your ego."

dowlenon1 A

9 август 2012, 10:07

Oh... yes, I saw.

Thanks, it has been corrected :)